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great

just so you know, i've given out only fifteen 10/10s
only comment: some of the lines don't sound like they have right number of syllables minor rewording might help it achieve pure distilled awesomeness.

guitardude77 responds:

Thank you very much for the honest review, and support! Haha. Yeah, I know some words sound like they drag on for a bit too long. Thanks for the insight though. =)

Yes, this IS newgrounds.....

but don't make a song about pot. you'll cut out half of all people who'd consider buying/listening to this song.

Content: D-

Execution B+

Awesome

make more. might want to keep out the "suicidal" bit, and it's not my favorite style of vocals, but you did good here. also, turn up the volume on the vocals

giftedbuttwisted responds:

Haha dude you do realize this is a remix of the Sean Kingston song right? I didn't write it.

extend it

15 seconds to the end i started to think it was about to finally stand up and rock! and then it didn't. It ended. I'm angry at you now. finish the song. shorten the "let us be free!" so it's more of an exclimation, and then rock out to deserved rebellious freedom

sounds like it MIGHT be good....

but I can't hear the vocals!

Profanity!???!!!???1!!

grow up men. that's just inexcusable. If i want to hear people cuss i'll pay a hobo. You're never going to go anywhere serious with "Hey motherfucker are you talking to me now?" as your first line. Don't put a 45 second solo at the start, for instance, don't do :
I don't ever wanna be like you
I don't fucking wanna be like you
I don't ever wanna be like you
I don't fucking wanna be like you
No more!

Do:
I don't ever wanna be like you
I don't wanna live like you
I don't ever wanna be like you
I don't wanna be like you
No more!

good job for a newgrounds submission....

but it could be SO much better. Slow down the vocals and your songs will sound good enough to get off of newgrounds.

slow it down.

Better than some of you others, but you need to slow the beginning down. Remember quality of lyrics is better than the number of words you can sing in a minute. the middle of the song is what saves it from the garbage bin

NOT as good as the orriginal

to anyone who thinks this is a "good" cover, listen to the real version of the song. It's an interesting take on it, but the lyrics were more yelling than singing.

a bit short, no?

way too short, not worth the time putting it up if you ask me......

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