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ROLLER COASTERS!!!!!

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Oh yeah........whoops. It's great, I like the pace of the song.... Not much more to say other than..... ROLLER COASTER!!!!!!!!!!!!! (yeah, kinda obvious I'm a RC junkie too)
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I love the refrains

they add so much to your songs

wow

Great work, it's just a bit too slow/sappy for my tastes, so I won't download it personally, but it's great work, keep it up.

I like it

I don't know what really to do with it though....... I'm working in java now, so tell you what, This might be something I'd like to use in a game I make... We'll see... I'll let you know (ask permission) if I decide I want to use it (That might not be a LONG LONG time however)

amusing

This has got to be for me the most nostalgic song on newgrounds for me. I just wish you had refrained from using your enrage spell (profanity)
-any chance of a clean version?

I'm liking the beat

not so much on the message. You've expressed yourself well with this song, I'm just not too much big a fan of "is it really worth our time to tell right from wrong" It's still a good submission.
Quality: 9.5
Content: 7.5

sounds good.....

until the mic seems to screw up around 0:45. FIX THAT. I don't care if you spend an hour repeating your recording process, you have to fix that, it's killing your song.

demented2005 responds:

Actually i have an updated version :)
I should prob get rid of this one and update it

"if you're gonna make it soft, make it meaningful"

and you did. Once yet AGAIN, this isn't my favorite style, but I consider it a success. Perhaps you'd like to change your comments on the song's rating now. Also, thanks for not cussing (as far as i can tell) in the course of this song. Three straight 10s isn't that bad a way to start off a song's rating history.

demented2005 responds:

haha, no cussing in this one :)
Tried to make this one a little more family friendly
thanks alot for the nice comment man :)

repetition

Don't spend a large chunk of your song repeating 4 words. You could get away with that in a longer song, but this is a bit too short to tolerate it. I like where the song sounded like it was going, it was just a bit too short. The ending kinda just cuts off, maybe change "It's a new day" to more of a chorus, which would solve the problem with then ending if added own there. Personally, I'm considering this a work in progress, but hey, it's your work, do (or don't) whatever you want with it. Oh, and profanity will never get you off of newgrounds and into the big-time because you're not a rapper, and I really hope you don't, because this shows potential, but needs a bit of editing work

demented2005 responds:

haha i read all your reviews, thanks so much :)
Yea the short ones are WIP.
Plus i hate the ending need to change some of that.
And i heard the song tonight gonna be a good night or whatever.
And was curious to see if i could do something like that.
haha :)

wow, first comment

still not quite my style, a bit too slow for my pref. That said, it's well done, which is a lot more than most of what Newgrounds can claim. I probably won't download this myself, BUT I would heartily recommend it to anyone else, I just prefer the more pule-inducing beats my self, this feels more like relax music to me....

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