lordsthief's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[~Roller Coaster Junkie~]

ROLLER COASTERS!!!!!

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Oh yeah........whoops. It's great, I like the pace of the song.... Not much more to say other than..... ROLLER COASTER!!!!!!!!!!!!! (yeah, kinda obvious I'm a RC junkie too)
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[~No Words~]

I love the refrains

they add so much to your songs

[Slave]

wow

Great work, it's just a bit too slow/sappy for my tastes, so I won't download it personally, but it's great work, keep it up.

[Our Invaders - Hania]

I like it

I don't know what really to do with it though....... I'm working in java now, so tell you what, This might be something I'd like to use in a game I make... We'll see... I'll let you know (ask permission) if I decide I want to use it (That might not be a LONG LONG time however)

[Cyrodil Mages Guild!]

amusing

This has got to be for me the most nostalgic song on newgrounds for me. I just wish you had refrained from using your enrage spell (profanity)
-any chance of a clean version?

[Rejection *New*]

I'm liking the beat

not so much on the message. You've expressed yourself well with this song, I'm just not too much big a fan of "is it really worth our time to tell right from wrong" It's still a good submission.
Quality: 9.5
Content: 7.5

[There she goes again -lyr]

sounds good.....

until the mic seems to screw up around 0:45. FIX THAT. I don't care if you spend an hour repeating your recording process, you have to fix that, it's killing your song.

demented2005 responds:

Actually i have an updated version :)
I should prob get rid of this one and update it

[My Dream --]

"if you're gonna make it soft, make it meaningful"

and you did. Once yet AGAIN, this isn't my favorite style, but I consider it a success. Perhaps you'd like to change your comments on the song's rating now. Also, thanks for not cussing (as far as i can tell) in the course of this song. Three straight 10s isn't that bad a way to start off a song's rating history.

demented2005 responds:

haha, no cussing in this one :)
Tried to make this one a little more family friendly
thanks alot for the nice comment man :)

[It's a New Day]

repetition

Don't spend a large chunk of your song repeating 4 words. You could get away with that in a longer song, but this is a bit too short to tolerate it. I like where the song sounded like it was going, it was just a bit too short. The ending kinda just cuts off, maybe change "It's a new day" to more of a chorus, which would solve the problem with then ending if added own there. Personally, I'm considering this a work in progress, but hey, it's your work, do (or don't) whatever you want with it. Oh, and profanity will never get you off of newgrounds and into the big-time because you're not a rapper, and I really hope you don't, because this shows potential, but needs a bit of editing work

demented2005 responds:

haha i read all your reviews, thanks so much :)
Yea the short ones are WIP.
Plus i hate the ending need to change some of that.
And i heard the song tonight gonna be a good night or whatever.
And was curious to see if i could do something like that.
haha :)

[Stop The Time]

wow, first comment

still not quite my style, a bit too slow for my pref. That said, it's well done, which is a lot more than most of what Newgrounds can claim. I probably won't download this myself, BUT I would heartily recommend it to anyone else, I just prefer the more pule-inducing beats my self, this feels more like relax music to me....